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Draw This Again: Fight or Flight

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Figured I'd throw this in for the Draw This Again contest

Original sketch, circa 2008: [link]
New Version, 2012: [link]

Edit: So, it seems I was not educated on the wonders of sRGB and how there's about 12 ways it can go wrong when I export from Photoshop. The colors should be less broken now.
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soas95
ÜberAwesome. BIG improvement. The only thing is that I like the flow of the overall posture and composition from the first picture better. Do you get what I'm saying? It just flows more smoothly... Another thing is that in the 2012 one, the foot in the lower-left is bugging me more than both feet in the original one. I liked the flatter, not-so-tall head from the first one. On a brighter note, I like the relative feet proportion in the later art and overall anatomy better.

I would like to help you see some other basic things that would make your art even more appealing than it is, that is, if you would like me to. I don't want to appear as though I think I'm amazing, because I'm not. Like yourself, I love critiques and feedback, so I know what I can improve on. As a last note, very nice rendering!